04/13/2003
This is a review of blank01.diaryland.com.
Content - 65/75pts.
[-]Execution - 45/45pts. First, I want to complain. Why don't you just send an e-mail instead of alienating everyone in the world but that one girl? That's what e-mail is for, you dolt.
You know, I've thought about it, and I too cannot figure out why all girls feel it necessary to lump all guys into one category. Must be that they spent all of their ability to differentiate between very similar but nevertheless unique entities on shoes. Sigh. What a waste.
On the other hand, if you don't want girls to justify your actions by saying "you're just a guy," why do you do it yourself?
Smart fellow - you called your own bluff so that no one else will be able to. So much for making you look like a total idiot.
Ha, ha.
Two words. The skeleton.
I don't like the conversations. I hate quizzes.
And then I began to agree. I think it was the neck and the staring at the computer. A few brisk trots around the room refreshed me, and anyway, this is funny.
And so was this. Oh, my, I'm enjoying myself.
If this is true, then who cares about this?
Keep on writing. Or stop. Do whatever you want. The diary is fine.
[-]Grammar/Mechanics - 0/10pts. People who don't use the shift key should be shot. This isn't an IM conversation. I have to read a paragraph or two of your writing, and it's difficult (impossible) to easily see where sentences begin and end without LARGE letters. You get zero points.
You mean LYING. "Laying" (in other words "lay") is a transitive verb. "Lie" is the intransitive verb.
[-]Readability - 10/10pts.
[-]Style - 10/10pts. Succinct. Ahh, the joy.
Layout - 9/10pts.
[-]Aesthetics - 4/5pts. I don't like the Tagboard, the Site Meter symbol, or the imood thing. The imood thing was on "uninspired" the entire time I read your diary, which reminded me of eating dead fish.
[-]Navigability/Legibility - 5/5pts. I do like how your font is large enough to read. White on black? Also approved.
Contact - 5/5pts.
Updates - 5/5pts.
Errors - 5/5pts. None.
Total - 89/100pts. If you'll look in your stats, you'll see that viewed 328 entries in 66 minutes and 36 seconds. You'll also know my static IP address. Bummer. (The label is "good." Congratulations.)
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